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Hook starter pack

Thirty opening lines grouped by the job they do, from raising the stakes to promising a payoff.

Sep 11, 20262 min read

Most people decide whether to keep reading in the first line. A hook works because of the job it does, so this pack groups thirty opening-line patterns by job. Pick the job your post needs, then fill in the pattern.

What's inside

Thirty patterns across six jobs: stakes, contradiction, payoff, curiosity, story and list. Each one has a fill-in pattern and a worked example. The first 6 of 30 rows:

jobpatternexample
Raise the stakesIf you [common action], you're losing [cost].If you reply to DMs once a day, you're losing the customers who asked first.
Raise the stakesStop [habit] before it costs you [result].Stop posting without a call to action before it costs you another quiet month.
Raise the stakes[Number]% of [audience] get this wrong.[4] of the [10] salon profiles we checked had a broken booking link.
Raise the stakesThe [thing] nobody checks until it's too late.The Google review nobody answers until it's too late.
Raise the stakesYou have [time] to [do something] before [consequence].You have three seconds to stop the scroll before they're gone.
Contradict[Popular advice] is wrong. Here's why.Posting every day is wrong. Here's why.

How to use it

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  1. Decide what your post needs the reader to feel first: worried, surprised, curious or keen
  2. Filter the sheet to that job and pick a pattern
  3. Fill it in with something only you could say. A specific number or name beats a general one. Use only numbers you can back up, since the examples are illustrations
  4. Read the hook, then the post. If the post doesn't deliver what the hook promised, change the hook

Tips

  • Keep the hook under 12 words so it fits before the "more" cut-off.
  • Write three hooks for every post and pick the best. The first one is rarely it.
  • Try the hook builder at the top of the templates page to see how a pattern reads in the feed.

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